Wow Raine—amazing writing . At one point I was thinking, “Lord of the Rings”—but it took a twist I did not foresee.

Very troubling ending —nevertheless great story!

Madame Lore—if you ever have a writing class: please sign me up!!!! What you do with words is really impressive. I admire paragraphs at times and think—how?!!! Just how??!! Lol

Bravo!!