Natalie
Sep 2, 2023

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I think it's BRILLIANT that you first just randomly brought us into the middle of the story when you first started...and then slowly went back to the beginning - and then brought it closer to this - and then did it. I suppose in so many ways it shows how the mind struggles with finding heads and tails of the unraveling of a marriage.

No one commits to something so beautiful expecting this finale - so it makes perfect sense to me that you took your time writing this...

Hope you'll keep writing!!!!

I'm the lucky one to learn from reading you. Thanks for all you've taught, shared, and inspired. Hope you'll continue for years to come...you are gifted!

Have a great weekend!

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Natalie
Natalie

Written by Natalie

Wife, mother, teacher, people/music lover and writer: sharing bits of her soul one story at a time.

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