Heidi - just absolutely INCREDIBLE. I've never read anything like this -- it deserves thousands of views and thousands of claps, wow. Loved it so so much...such power, such imagery, such love - I was fighting for their love to endure! And then I celebrated with them...truly - absolutely amazing.
Heidi, I want to introduce you to Misbah Sheikh and John Hansen are also poets, and Misbah started a publication called The Hub Publication and I would encourage you to write and submit there to gain some support and perhaps you may enjoy the readings there...
Enjoyed this so much and I just want it to be widely read! Keep writing!!!