Been reading you a long time, I’ve devoured your stories and know first-hand—you know your stuff Mitch!! You have excellent control and magnificent voice.
I knew and FELT that first section was yours. Unquestionably.
Second—I know you’re capable and coin’s, but it felt aided. Purely from an observer POV—it was a type of writing I wish I knew how to do when I was assigned papers in school. It’s a higher level writing that does what it’s supposed to do….
I found it engaging. Knowing your hand was in it kept me propelled…
What happens over time as writers rely more and more on it—they slowly will disappear. Their readers may not tell the difference—but my theory: it won’t inspire, move, draw. Perhaps it will.
I gave no idea.
Agreed…it’s here to stay. It can be a tool for greater good.
Four our young creative minds—I hope they know it’s creativity must be fed with ingenuity and once you stop feeding it from our own thoughts and ideas, it loses power and growing potential.
I trust humans will know that. And will continue to create! Or it’s my hope they will!
Thanks for writing! Thought provoking!
Be well!